Secrets meet beneath the stars
Whispers walk in silent streets
Heartbeats quicken as fingers touch
Darkness cloaks touching lips
Parting words linger until tomorrow.
Author notes
Prompt: midnight rendezvous
In a list
A contest entry
- 5 Lines Of Wonder by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended October 17, 2008, 30 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wonderful expression, leaves much to the readers mind to fill in the blanks whilst instilling the sense of anticipation. well done.
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this was a great poem. the imagery was written beautifully. i loved the first two lines. they were well written.
goodluck in the contest
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" Secrets meet beneath the stars "
that is a very pretty line.
Honestly I loved this whole piece.
Good luck in the contest.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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This is beautiful.
Truly is "5 Lines Of Wonder"
you create such amazing imagery and emotion.
I especially love the first line, so pretty :]
Well done, an excellent poem!
best of luck in the contest you have entered.
ElectricBloom
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Wow, you made me jump, I didn't even realise I'd posted it
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