Rooms are quiet, painted with silence so gold
Stumbling through the dark and out into the cold
Leaving at 11:30 to reach you by midnight at the most
These seconds so bliss, an eternity that seems to grow
I treasure these rendezvous when I can hold you so close
A contest entry
- 5 Lines Of Wonder by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended October 17, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the memories created by such moments can last a lifetime, but the joy comes from finding time for the moments in the first place.
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i love the love that floats throughout this whole piece.
You really pulled this piece together so nicely.
Good love in the contest.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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thank you, i really appreciate it.
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