Midnight rendezvous with you
Delight in the dark of night
Startled stars,twinkle, wink
As 'neath beaming moon we spoon
Alas, the dawning comes to soon.
In a list
A contest entry
- 5 Lines Of Wonder by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended October 17, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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the last two lines are so soft and romantic one can only be left breathing a deep sigh, very good expression in this.
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Too soon, too soon
you stir the pot, I swoon!
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there is something about this piece that i really love.
it's amazing how one can pack so much feelings in 5 lines.
good luck in the contest.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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