Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Dawn’s Break

Missing image

 

 

 

A shadowed requiem, a cry

No more, nightmare to pain

As Sunlight parts the sky

To joyously reign in again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: 20 words of brilliance.

I love the wonder of a sunrise...and immediately envisioned this woman as the embodiment of sunshine.

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    A new day signified by the sunrise can surely make us feel alive again! This is very beautiful, and I'm amazed you managed to do such lovely rhyme in so few words!



  • poet2angels gold member
    October 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Brilliant and beautiful
    bringing in brightness
    and a sigh to my heart ♥

    Lynda

1 - 5 of 5