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Seen Through

Your smoke and mirrors
could never fool me
you thought me blinded
by prettily spoken promises
Translucent Lies ~ seen through!

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  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    this was well written and good take on the prompt.
    but why is 'mirrors' capitilized in the first line? otherwise i really liked the imagery and emotions in this piece.

    thanks for entering and goodluck