In the darkness, shines
Ancient fire unlike any other.
Numberless enormous spheres fill
The gaps of eternity.
Divine souls watch from
Atop our great existence.
They guard and even the flow
Of phenomenon's presence.
Author notes
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Word: Macrocosm
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I like this.
It soothes the flames in my head.
I'm impressed by how much you've fit into such a sized piece.
Thank you for entering this into my contest.
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Great job! Post more later....
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Incredible! Loved the uniqueness and the vibrant words. The last two lines are my favorite. They really topped off the piece. Great work and thanks for the comment!
Jae.
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I love were you've taken the prompt. Expecially since this prompt was a hard one. The imagery was amazing. The first line was a grabber and the last line was a twister. Great Write.
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your word is macrocosm
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