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Beauty

angelic gold cascades down into fluttering nonsense
pouring peace through my veins
light of dignity showers me
you are beautiful

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  • imoutyo
    October 5, 2008
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    pithy and gorgeous, and the last line rings nicely.


  • poet2angels gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    This is lovely!
    SUch a tranquil flow to it
    TY for entering!

    Lynda