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Your The Best Thing in this World

When I see you my hear starts to race
and i cant believe your mine.

I love you with all my heart,
even thow we havent had the time,
feels like i can love you forever.

When we are apart it kills me and i
know it kills you to but we can get
threw this together.

When I look you in the eyes, I dont
want to look awa. When I'm around you
all i want to be is in you arms and
never leave you. When we kiss i know
its pastionate and I know you mean it
when we say "I love you". I can tell
you mean it.

Weh we talk on the phone and i havent
seen you or I miss you. I'm glad when
you call me, I can hear your voice.

The teddy bear won for me lays on my
bed and when I miss you (Which is all the time),
I grab it and hold it to my chest, while I'm
thinkin about you.

The neckless thats says you love me, i
never take it off. I love wearing it.

Your Jaket i wear all the time and it has
your smell on it. I smell it all the time
and i close my eyes and wish you were right
next to me.

I cant wait till you move in with your dad
so I can see you all the time.

Your the best thing that has ever happened
to me. I wouldnt change you for anything .

Used to when I was dating other guys, if i
sall another guy i would think there hot.
Now when I see a guy I could care less what
look like because I got you your wat have
dreamed, prayed, and wished for. Your all
I asked for.

I have you and thats all I want.

Nothing else!!

I love you Jacob!!

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  • Allie-
    October 6, 2008
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    awww! this is a really good poem! i love it! keep writing! ^_^


  • ladybug737
    October 5, 2008

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    good job

    you are a good writer and i hope you keep on writing too bad i can't give you more than 3 claps you deserve it