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Better Game

I
can
see
right
through
your
wicked
games
and
finally
Boy,
you've
met
your
match-
Ain't
that
a
crying
shame?

Author notes

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  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    good take on the prompt. this was nicely written I really liked it.
    the first two lines were my favourite, and same with the last line.
    nice write.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • feetus
    October 5, 2008

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    Yeah, what Yoru said! Amazing use of twenty words!
    I really like how you word your work.. clever and fun


  • XxYoru-OkamixX
    October 5, 2008

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    whoa that's really cool and powerful for so few words great job ^^