Ripples in pulse revealing
pools of transparent radiance,
reflecting a signal
of mutual adulation;
stitching threads,
To a beating heart.
Author notes
Prompt: Translucent
A contest entry
- 20 entries:: 20 words --PROMPT♥ by etoile.
450 points, ended October 8, 2008, 18 entries
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"Ripples in pulse revealing
pools of transparent radiance,"
simply amazing imagery here! great write!
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Wow this held so much
in such little. A wonderful
piece you have crafted here.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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this write was amazing. i loved your take on the prompt. the imagery was fantastic! the first two lines were my favourite and they really drew me into the poem.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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Thankyou. As I've said elsewhere, I often love working with prompts that constrain you to a limited number of words or lines, it can give the mind a good workout streamlining the piece to what is needed.
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Gorgeous write!
good luck in the contest
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Many, many thanks.
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