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Mademoiselle Papillon

  Mademoiselle Papillon,

    spins golden curls

        flys wings unfurl

            gifting beaded sighs

              ~  effervesce ~

                  spills visions wide

Author notes

one of my favorite fairy pics .. enjoyed .. thankyou Lynda

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  • penman gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. Great choice of 20 words. Best of luck in the contest.


    • libithina
      October 18, 2008
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      Thankyou so very much that means such a lot Lib x x x


  • maralisa silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    I think your poem is beautiful you decribe butterflies perfectly with delightful imagery good luck in the contest

    • libithina
      October 12, 2008
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      Butterflies are so delicately gorgeous, watch them for hours,
      thankyou so much Maralisa for your lovely words s Lib x x


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    I can tell by your beautiful words that they were inspired by the lovely picture. Enjoyed the read.
    Juls


    • libithina
      October 12, 2008
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      Yes it is a beautiful picture thankyou so much my dear friend s Lib x x


  • poet2angels gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    awwwww so lovely this is...I love the word
    "Papillon" when I found out it was a word for butterfly in French I used it in a couple of poems..so pretty

    Lynda

    • libithina
      October 12, 2008
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      yes it is a lovely word .. we had a dear little dog that we named Papillon because his ears were so big in relation to his little body thanks Lynda s Lib x x

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