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Through Autumn Meadow

Missing image
Her earth swells willow's wing,
wandering wave
in changing weather,

effervescent feather,
drifting windy tether,
kissing blush,

through autumn meadow.








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  • Night Hope gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Ahhh, my favorite season of all. Congratulations, my Friend.


  • Peteskid gold member
    October 6, 2008
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    so much vibrant imagery in so few words, truly remarkable...PK


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    Loved the alliteration here, and the diction is elegant.

    All the best,
    mj.


  • poet2angels gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    How very beautiful and clever...
    this angel poet does endeavor
    to keep angels in a sigh forever

    Lynda