midnight strikes, we stand in the moonlight holding and remembering.
a night of desires met and passions fulfilled.
i still have you in my senses and you keep me dizzy.
our skin cooled in the night breeze glistening still.
together we stand in the after glow of our eternal love.
A contest entry
- 5 Lines Of Wonder by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended October 17, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very well constructed, soft and nostalgic styled piece. mistake in your title though "stroke" not "storke". best wishes to you.
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this is such an enjoyable piece of poetry.
i really love the ending.
great job, and good luck in the contest.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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This is perfect passion, and so eloquently expressed, very nice. And I'm glad you are writing for that means all is well again. Thank goodness for that my friend!
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very sweet passion here you penned here in this write hon i so enjoyed the magic touch you provided to the eyes good luck in the contest
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Such vivid imagery!!! I adore this my sweet friend!!!
Love~
Suzie
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Awe... This is a beauty.
such passion filled words.
Delila
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