A child taken to heaven so young,
the years her hopes and dreams unsung.
Hearts joys in hand she waits.
Author notes
The young are never far away for upon the morning list they skip and play only in our dreams do their laughter ring true for in heaven they wait for me and you
A contest entry
- Make Me Sigh In 20 Words by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 5, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Taken to heaven all dreams are saved until the time of rejoining
Comments
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Sad is this little poem
Touched my heart so much and many who lose their loved ones so young.
Best wishes
Julie x
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a beautiful take on the promt I think your poem was very deep and quite sad we never know when our time will come to a end in live good luck in the contest
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Fragile, despondent, bittersweet were the words that came to mind, and yet so true were your own explanations
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Sad and beautiful...
This is such a delicate and to the point peice. Good luck in the contest!
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Sadly beautiful!
TY for entering this lovely piece
Lynda
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