a woven intricacy mix of fabric and plastic
creates an invisible armor
around my chest-cavity;
covering up every concealed organ
from accidental stealing
and mistaken abuse.
Author notes
prompt: laminated
26 words.
In a list
A contest entry
- laminated by going nowhere.
600 points, ended October 6, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very nice... accidental stealing... that fabric/plastic better be really strong. well done. thank you.
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thanks for holding the contest and the silver
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creates an invisible armor
around my chest-cavity;
I wish I had that armor.
it would be fucking useful.
if I haven't already mentioned it... I'm kind of depressed.
sell me armor?
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Nice. Interesting take on the prompt, I feel it's very unique. I love it.
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Jeez,
you and Aanika need to stop entering contests because you both need to give other people chances
haha.
I love the whole thing.
The ending stick out to me the most.
ily ♥
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ahaaaa
thanks
but.. this isnt that amazing -
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Oh yes.
Whatever.
That's why me and Amanda are like "OMGWOWWOWOWILOVETHIS."
We only say that when we truly hate something
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awww
i totally missed out on this argument
hahaha
iloveit
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teehee
ps. iloveyou guyss
you both made my day
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lmfaaao okkays..
hopefully the judge agrees with you guys
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WOW.
WOW.
WOWWW.
Holy geez this is AMAZING. If you don't win this contest I will have to hurt somebody hahah
This is amazinggg, dear. You have no idea.
I started reading & was immediately captivated. Everything about this piece was alluring & captivating, & powerful with amazing structure to it.
Keep it uppp I freaking loved thisss.
obviously
♥
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