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Around the World

Translucent times around the world
With News giving it all away
No secrets from each other
Translucent, should it be?

A contest entry

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  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    i really liked the idea behind this write. it was a great take on the prompt. i liked the last two lines. they were well written.

    thanks for entering and goodluck