When you first asked and I said yes
its was two birds which had finally met
We would soar so high,beginning with a few glances
it turned to those light peeks upon my tender neck
You would go out of your way to see me walk by
so you could run out and hug me or even just to say hi
Everything was new from the grass up to the moon
you put things in a whole new glistening light
My eyes glittered with pride,when you walked by my side
with our hands entwined as if had always been
Our love so young, so pure and sweet
that I wish for it to never cease
Author notes
3. First love
A contest entry
- QUICKIE FOR LOVE by solitarytear.
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Comments
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this is really sweet
Great Write and
Thank you for entering
Good Luck
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nice remembrance of new love. made me feel all "gushy" inside.
Write On!
jIM
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beautiful
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