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plowman

 

 

Always with you

I am the plowman


my hands finger

colter ...

moisten ...

part ...

make parallel furrows

and circles

on your body



round centre of
Labyrinth labia

and more places
for my most competent cock

to plant flowers

 

 

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  • natari gold member
    February 20
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    Alice is one lucky lady


  • tara wilson gold member
    January 29

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    i really like this, very sensual, sexy & confident. i haven't read the word 'cock' in a poem i liked in a very long time..lol


  • cubert
    January 28

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    It's cocky, which is actually appealing....I don't think I'd have liked this as much if you'd taken a softer approach.

    It's not even safe to comment further...


  • Cannonsfire
    January 26

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    Arousing and sensual even with the use of 'cock' perhaps in the nicest way it can be used...Thanks for the add, glad I stopped by to read C


    • quietly burning
      January 26
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      hey maybe it's like the real thing, it's best when you don't see it coming. thnx for your words.


  • drama1000 silver member
    January 25
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    Impactful

    "my hands finger

    "colter ...

    "moisten ...

    part ..."


    • quietly burning
      January 25
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      what can i say, feeling very "Alpha" that day !

      thanx for your words


      • drama1000 silver member
        January 25
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        And under those circumstances, what woman would mind that?

        Go forth and be "Alpha!"


  • Naughtygrlred
    January 12
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    cute


  • truembrace
    December 12, 2008

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    ummm... wow. I thought I was going to read an interpretation of "let it snow let it snow let it snowwww..." I stopped short of blushing with the analogy. (Ok.. so I didn't but it looks better to seem a bit naive, no? lol

    This might be all that some of us "get" for a while so I imagine many will be back to read this one again

    Thanks for writing something to get a smile out of -- an impish one at that.

    Kim


  • Cat
    November 12, 2008
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    did she like the poem?

    love the title.

    m


  • TheNymph
    October 22, 2008
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    earthy erotica at its best. and ..ahem...great imagery. another great write as always.


  • StarrieNacht
    October 14, 2008

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    Very clever write you've posted! Totally a thought provoking piece and a grand use of cock!
    Keep on writing for you have lots to say, searh, teach, learn and write!


  • Blkwidow77 silver member
    October 5, 2008

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    I have to tell you, that's probably the prettiest way I've ever seen the word 'cock' used.

    Yes, I suppose all men wish to be gardners but not all have the green thumb required. Soft and eloquent. As if you could write any other way.


  • Manicmuze
    October 5, 2008
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    very good...


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    planting from seeds to a flower grows into a flower...is a labor of love

    It's nice to read a new write from you...

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