A Ruby Sun
Of Blazing Fire
Burns away the Dew
The Arctic Chill
Of Frozen Winter
Makes Ice of the Dew
The fire of your soul
Is like the Ruby Sun
But Your heart is frozen
With an Arctic Chill
Your Spirit Calls to mine
Your Heart Denies My Call
You are a contrast to me
And I live for the Time
When we can Join as One
Body, Heart, and Soul
Author notes
Challenge #2
opposites. Tell me how they partain to each other
How neither can exist without the other.
Love and Hate. Fire and Ice.....
I think this fits.
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There is something very dream-like about this piece, like two seperated spirits, one crying out in vain for the other. Well written.
Good write.
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it. It was for an RP I was doing, one person praying for the time when the other wasn't both hot and cold towards them.
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Great poem for the prompt.. understanding, relatable and truthful.
This is a fantastic write!!
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Prompts for the freshwrite. That shows that you have creativity. This poem is great. I love the parallelism in this and the color coding. It has great flow. I really enjoyed this, great write.
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