Sing me a love song,
Weave for me dreams,
Of lovers, and passion,
And settings serene.
We'll hold hands in
the moonlight,
And kiss by the fire,
Your happiness my favor,
Your heart, my desire.
Oh do sing me a love song,
One so splendid and true,
So I may peacefully slumber,
And dream of being with you.
Author notes
It just sorta happened, well the first four lines, i had to squeeze out the rest.
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Such a sweet love poem, Phil
I hope you have someone to sing to and will respond in kind, even if out of key 
I like this piece, simply written and with so much meaning implied.
Dee
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I'm not really a fan of rhyme if you are not Frost or Poe (which for the sake of simplicity I shall assume you are not), but this is lovely. I love it.
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despite my feelings about rhyme i really enjoyed this hun, short and sweetness
i dunno about you but i'm in love with love so this is wonderful.
Tasha
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Absolutely loved the first two stanzas, and you are right, you did squeeze out the last one..Awesome poem, but take some time to re-think the last stanza...one suggestion... is to repeat the first stanza and then try writing the 4th stanza
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Splendid squeezing! Good meter and spot on smooth rhyme.
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I so love this one phil!!!!! Bravo! This is short, sweet, and full of romance. It kinda reminds me of something an old poet would penn!
Peace and Love
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outstandingly beautiful.
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This is an interesting piece. I really liked the last two lines of the last stanza; although I did like the whole piece over all. Your rhythm and (thank god) lack of rhyme, your over all meter, the flow... was all very well written.
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