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Jack-o-lantern (Hay(na)ku)

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candle, knife
Pumpkin gets life

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  • toomysterious
    October 15, 2008
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    Short, sweet and to the point. Very apt indeed.

  • ea silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    very cute, terse little piece that dances with the flickering candlelight of the season. I like that you managed a rhyme in this.