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Wasting Away



Abandoned,
I shiver.

Sanity
diminsished

Reckless,
cold,
lonely,

I merge
into oncoming darkness.



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Artist Credit
http://jbdesign.deviantart.com/art/Depression-98711228

Critique

A contest entry

How Do You Like My Soul? --- Critique

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    This is just superb, it touched my heart as if this is what I had seen myself. Best to you in the contest