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Fighting Life

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Bound by hate and solitude,
lonely, hard, and cold
Snatching lives almost at will,
with no rhyme and reason told

Floating on the endless sea,
of desires dreams and needs
Plucking both the good and bad,
he says he’ll set them  free

To what end; where do they go,
what lies deep in the mist
Is death the end or just the start,
to the how long we will exist

No guidelines does he follow,
as he strolls along the way
Looking for a soul to take,
a ravenous hunger he feels today,

Man or woman, boy or girl,
small children are not exempt
From a gorgeous debutant,
to a strung out hooker quite unkempt

He seems to feed on sorrow,
with a thirst  for the bittersweet
And with all the death around us,
he is trying to compete

For there is another out there,
doing bidding for his foe
Babies sucking in their first breaths,
with their little eyes aglow

Dare he try to make odds even,
will he take them now in twos
Can he keep the numbers even,
or this battle will he lose

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Bosiarbooger http://sya.deviantart.com/art/Death-is-an-Angel-10040558

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    Love the uniqueness of this poem from the image
    You have drawn us in, absorbed us, and those thoughts
    devour.
    Babies sucking in their first breaths,
    with their little eyes aglow
    Best wishes
    Julie


  • chilali
    October 6, 2008

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    Wow. Very interesting take on the prompt. This poem was very well written just like the rest of your work. Beautifully penned Boog! Good luck in the contest!


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    Great imagery used in this one. A very dark and thought provoking write you've penned here. Best of luck in this contest


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    i liked the subtle vulnerability in the middle!
    good luck in the contest, this was so very good