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sleep resides
on another's corner
leaving insomnia
as a neighbour

disbelief halts words
no longer free
to run through a street
called communication

sadness seeps black
flowing along
the paths to my soul







A contest entry

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  • ms-cuddles silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    Love truly falls apart without communication. I've been here. Hope all is well now. thanks for entering and good luck. Hugs~ Cuddles


  • Angelflower
    October 6, 2008
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  • Cannonsfire
    October 5, 2008
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    C


  • sheltered
    October 5, 2008

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    how sad and lonely
    life would be
    without communication

    like a slayer with a double sided sword
    when there is no one to be slayed


  • libithina
    October 5, 2008
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    brilliantly conveyed my friend Lib x x


    • fortyninereasons gold member
      October 5, 2008
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      Thank you for reading my words. Sometimes all one can do is write what we feel.
      Juls

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