Address demons
Drawn into characters;
Tenderly.
Employ
Determination,
And deviate,
Down inlets,
Catching thoughts
Easily directed,
and dissected,
Decide,
Investigate;
Carefully travel,
Empty distances,
And dream desire
Into closure,
Treat every demon
And devilish deed inside
Courageously,
Triumphantly,
Every day.
Author notes
I used the word addicted-and went from there.
In a list
A contest entry
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Comments
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heyo, Long time no read, i thought i would pop on to see what new stuff my fav. poet has written and i'm blown away, yet again. You're amazing.
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i love the way you used your poem to describe your chosen word. if you want to consider revising, i might look at some of your single word lines. it starts to feel a bit like a list at times. try to create phrases as opposed to stand alone words. just my opinion.
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i was tryin to understand, addicted, and ur piece. i had to read it again a few more times and now its starting to sink in. u see im not very good with understanding abstract poetry, i really have to break it down lol...im slow. but now that i get ur vision, all i can say is awesome!
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great job with the form. you hit it spot on. i'll be back to comment on the actual poem later.
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