A eutopia in the mania of dopamine
greater than that of opium,
more addicting than cocaine,
overpowered by excess dimethyltrypolene;
the natural LSD of the brain.
A thought is sent free
into fourth dimensional realities,
closely watched, the path it runs,
perhaps a 'sicko' type of fun.
But one day it might never return,
for too long in the inferno,
I'll burn.
A contest entry
- TwIsTeD by InMyFlames.
650 points, ended October 28, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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"A thought is sent free
into fourth dimensional realities,
closely watched, the path it runs,
perhaps a 'sicko' type of fun."
they are my favourite lines, good job and thanks for entering
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sounds very frighting Joe
Roses to you
Teresa
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