A group of people
Who stand together
Who are connected
Deeply together
Those people
Are a family
A family are some people
Who want you to flourish
They want you to follow
The path of success
They only want the best for you
Because they love you
Being part of a family
A true part of a true family
Is sometihng everyone should desire
Because a true family
Is a symbol of faith
Of loyalty, of love
United families
Are a gift from God
May our family
Remain a gift!
Author notes
I know I've written a previous poem on family and its not so good but I was quite young then! Anyways I love my family and I hope it always stays together.
Its not perfect, tell me how to make it that way!
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Lovely
this is really special
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thank you
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brilliante
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what a beautiful poem with touching sentiment. I agree with you, families are a gift and being surrounded in their care is the best feeling anywhere. Good job and keep writing dear.
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Family
~~~FAMILY~~~
wow this is perfect!!! i like this poem!!! there's nothing wrong with this poem, and you should have a million comments, because this is awesome!! have a nice day, -slick99
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