thoughts mingled
in folds kept safe
while alone hung silent,
distance stretched
threads of understanding
naked truths arched back
against discords' grain
clash of wants
ebbed waves, cleared mist
clarity rocks gently
on desire's steady motion
until a duet plays
In a list
A contest entry
- freeverse & prose [emotions attached] by xxRainbowDawnxx.
600 points, ended October 26, 2008, 35 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Some beautiful choice of words here, to shape image and meaning. It's almost like a couple of snapshots of thoughts, or ideals.
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'until the duet plays' a different tune .. where 'clarity rocks gently' Lib x x
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This is beautiful!! I love the soft desires in this piece!! You did an excellent job!! I LOVE IT!!
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Beautifully soft desires here My good friend, I am sure You will be heard.
C
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