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Half and Half

Im torn between
familly and friends

Friends where i fell safe
live life
without a care in the world.
Where days just slip by
and no one notices

Familly where i feel at home
Where My idol is, the one
whos teachings i follow
who might not be there tomorrow

I am torn between them
One in the heartland
One in the bayou.
One emptie soul.

Without one im emptie
without the other im the same
Together showed harmony
That wont ever be there again

Is there an answer
that can solve both
or do i have to chose one
and live without the other?

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  • butterflytears
    October 6, 2008

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    you asked one of the hardest questions there could ever be...and its almost impossible to answer, it just depends on what your heart decides to go towards...
    you told me last summer to follow my heart...now you must do the same.


  • PerpetualNight
    October 5, 2008

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    good poem i'm slightly confused though if one is in the bayou and one in the heartland then how was there ever harmony? hmm? just curious.

    you get tres clappies casue i can


    • Izu
      October 5, 2008
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      they are now split, they were in one place. now they are sperated, friends/father, Heartland/Bayou. see?


      • PerpetualNight
        October 5, 2008
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        oh i thought you were talking about family in the bayou, ie grandparents and freind up here... i understand

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