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Creme Brule

This creme brule
I don't know why
I eat it
it's texture is now
like cream cheese
not so appealing anymore
seeing as it's been
in the fridge
one day too long

So as I sit
with creme brule
you're on the other end
playing your reindeer games
ignoring the problem
and I still dont know
why I eat this
maybe you should take a break
just to think for a bit
maybe I should take a break
let it sink in a bit
that I use this creme brule
like you use your game play

Maybe I should stop
smearing this dessert
across the roof of my mouth
I don't even want
to eat it
I just don't want
to think about it
that this time we spend apart
was wasted on ignoring
the problem

I don't want creme brule anymore

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  • sevnsyn silver member
    October 5, 2008
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    great write