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The Winter Killer's Confession

Barkeep, hey you, another one over here
I seem to have had to much, I mean not enough I fear
No don’t stop them coming got a lot on my mind
You know I don’t look it but I’ve even served time

Just got out yesterday for a forty dollar fine, for real
I get no respect I can’t believe after all the people I kill
They had the nerve to locked me up for some damn tickets
They ddn’t realize who they had I’m completely wicked

My weapon of choice, that’s right my speciality is using ice
They called me the “Winter Killer” and I thought that’s nice
I kind of liked it when the newspapers made that name up
Cause they couldn’t figure out what I use, they were stuck

I guess I’ll have to kill you too since you now know
Oooops its not winter yet haha don’t have no snow
I really like using those ice cicles/spears hanging around
Then they melt and the murder weapons is never found

Where’s my drink didn’t I say keep em coming I’m celebrating
What’s this place anyway I think I’m hallucinating
Wait a minute, wait a minute this ain’t no bar
Dim that damn light I think you’ve gone to far

How did I get in here anyway you ain’t no bartender
Oh yeah I remember now somethin about a busted fender
What’s that you say, you taped the whole conversation
Inadmissable he shouted as he passed out in desperation

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    What a cool idea for a murder weapon!!! Love the ending how it all got weird and twisted up!


    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 18, 2008
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      Thank you so much for taking the time to read and commenting. Can you imagine a melting murder weapon. LOL And they say there's no such thing a s the perficet crime. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    LMAO I love the ending Seems someone had a few to many! I also like the murder weapon, neat idea, would never be found hey! A wicked write, thanks for entering and good luck

    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 10, 2008
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      Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I've always liked that idea for a murder story. Thank you for allowing me to use it. LOL God Bless, Jo-Ann