The phone rings,
And she jumps.
Could it be for her?
Or is it just someone,
For her to be complained about to.
She's not welcome here.
Tip toeing around the house,
Hardly eating anything.
She cant afford to upset anyone,
For she has no where else to go.
So she tries to be invisible...
Out of site out of mind.
Kicked out of her own bed,
So someone else can sleep.
She was once so strong,
So out spoken.
But they took that away,
So she hides in the shadows.
Trying to be invisible...
Feeling Trapd
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A very fine write, indeed. You expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
love it....great meaning.
couple spelling errors though, (haha but dont worry, im a terrible speller as well) but i do know how to spell these words..
invisable is actuall INVISIBLE
and ells is actually ELSE
and complaind is COMPLAINED
aford is AFFORD
ummm not sure about a couple other ones...lol so i wont say it
but awesome job regaurdless!!
keep up the good work, haha and maybe use a spell checker? thats what gets me by =)
peace. love. -
This is a very poignant rhyme, i love that it doesn't rhyme, it gives it more depth I can feel the utter dejectedness, I would liketo make this person cocoa and run her a hot bath take care littlefishone
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