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Virus

Animalcule atmosphere
Insufficient occupants of the dying.
Spreading the virus to the newly living.
A biohazard wasteland.

Hearing Impared
The thunder cries destruction.
Though we are stuffed with our own deception.
And choose not to listen.

We are the wicked and the willing.
Gluttons to satisfy.
The superficial pain we thus pacify.
Developing the willingly wicked.

Supernatural idealiations
To decifer fiction from fact.
Incompetent to properly react.
To alleviate us from this pestilence.

Author notes

I wrote this 29 september2008 5:05pm on a plane ride back to rehab

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  • Great word usage, this write is without doubt memorable.


  • Joseph Hollis
    November 30, 2008

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    Perhaps a glimpse into your state of mind at the time. This is a very reflective write. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.


  • Painted Nails
    October 5, 2008
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    Wow, your writing is beautiful. Love this piece!
    Love
    Syd


  • knitonepearlone
    October 5, 2008

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    An interesting write which required a few reads to understand and appreciate. I hope rehab worked for you. Well done with this.


  • xeroabyss II
    October 4, 2008

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    Wow, you must have had a bit on your mind as you sailed through the clouds.
    I really love the way your writting style is becoming

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