Slipping through time,
fading from Autumn's
colors of maturity
falling into Springs
youth with questions.
Author notes
picture is your prompt
found at photo.net
A contest entry
- How brilliant are you? by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 5, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful!!! I looked at the picture and drew a blank! You got something of meaning and depth!
Congrats on the silver!
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Very nice, your metaphors are wonderful.
Congratulations on the Silver.
Love
Don
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Well it goes without saying that you are a brilliant writer! And this is no exception! Congratulations on your well deserved silver
Gaylene
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Deep with imagery and meaning... x
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It's very rich in imagery for so few words. I think you responded to the prompt very well. The topic and richness of your word choice reminds me of haiku.
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