Verdant life’s
annual metamorphous.
Autumnal blankets
cover gently,
preparing for winter’s chill…
and spring’s return.
Author notes
Too obvious?
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: www.photo.net
15 words (and used them all 
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A contest entry
- How brilliant are you? by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 5, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
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a very nice take on the prompt . . congrats on the gold !!
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Awww shucks... thank you It's nice when I don't have to come in second to you
Ken
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Wow, this gold is well deserved! This poem is more then perfect, its more then brilliance, its just outstanding and wow!
So much meaning in those few words!
Congrats ^_^
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Congratulations on the Gold.
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Beautiful metaphors my friend, we have seen some of those seasons, haven't we.
Congratulations on the Gold.
Don
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You've certainly captured the moment... x
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this is a beautiful poem.. the changing of the seasons are such a wondrous experience to witness. your words have captured all that in its entirety. excellent job
I absolutely love the first 2 lines
good luck in the contest my lover
kat
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It is a literal take, but I think you've done it beautifully to describe nature's cycle!
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Verdant life’s
annual metamorphous.
I like how you manage to convey an entire year of growth and life into four words. No, it's not too obvious. I think it's beautifully written. Good luck in the contest!
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