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Bailout Heralded (haiku)



bailout heralded
Prez presses for quick passage
loan frauds rewarded




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  • Polaja Greeters member
    October 9, 2008

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    I love the traditional form for the contemporary drama this is very well done and I enjoyed the way you made this flow so perfectly congratulations on the honorable mention!

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • grannyeri gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    Interesting way of using haiku to write about this wall street problem that will not just go away. Very troubled times we are going through; so many people losing so much - another depression coming? Liked this.


  • Malabu
    October 5, 2008

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    well one can vision bush trying so hard to boost his image...but once again proves to me he's a moron by not veto- ing the extra pork in the barrel...great ku
    mal


  • ShelleyA gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    A very clever write and skillfully crafted haiku. You have summed up the bailout creatively in this piece. Well penned. Best wishes in the contest.

  • NeedaMuse
    October 5, 2008

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    Very good

    You may have a future in print news reporting. All three lines read like headlines.

    Thanks for entering.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 5, 2008
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    It's enough to make one cry. So true. Bitter to the taste.

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