i'll be your love[R] forever
i'll be your heart and soul
[breaker]
i'll be your everything
just give me a chance
i'll hug you and hold you
[squeeze you
til you can't breathe]
i'll kiss you and hold your hand
[break the bones in your fingers]
i'll be everything you want me to be
[everything you can't stand]
i'll be your definition of perfection
[i'll be your utter DETRUCTION]
i'll hold you til you fall asleep
[then get up and walk away]
i'll whisper to you sweet nothings
[i hate you, just go away]
i'll be your everything
[i'll be nothing at all]
you'll fall so in love with me
[you'll learn to hate everything i do]
you'll love me
[you'll hate me]
you'll hold me
[you'll break me]
you'll be my only lover
[you'll have so many guys]
i'll be everything you want me to be
[everything you can't stand]
i'll whisper to you sweet nothings
[i hate you, just go away]
i love you
[i hate you]
i'll be yours forever
[i'll just walk away]
i'll tell you you're beautiful
[i'll be the reason you're not]
i love you...
{just love me back}
Author notes
Dirty and Broken
(yes, i am a girl)
i wanna be your addict lover
pwease?
A contest entry
- Complete me[?] by Erbby.
700 points, ended October 6, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i'll be your definition of perfection
[i'll be your utter DETRUCTION]
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i'll whisper to you sweet nothings
[i hate you, just go away]
well doll i must say this is one of my fave's i loved it bunches
thanks much for entering..xoxoxlove
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thank you!
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did u like it?
can u tell me seomthing besides 'k'?
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You can be my addict lover.
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sorr, baby, my boat don't float that way
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And what way would that be?
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...you should knwo which way my boat floats- you were my only damn exception
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That maybe but there is always more fish in the sea as they say.
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does it float my way?
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of course!
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sweetness!
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