Let me get this straight,
you tell me I'm p/e/r/f/e/c/t/ && that we'd make a ten,
but after a while it all goes d
o
w
n
the drain.
I see you looking at her, looking at me, looking at her
&& by the way I'm not a L*e*o* && I don't lie
I would never pretend to be a brute just so I can lie
[in your arms]
If I wanted to hold you tightly I would,
but then again I'm not s\t\u\p\i\d\ to know what you're up to.
Babe, don't get me wrong, but you aren't Mr. Right
all you really are is one f*u*c*k*e*d* up try.
&& you know what? NEVERMIND!
You never pay attention; God you're so damn blind!
Try to t.a.p.e. up your eyelids to see if you notice
that all you need is something I was willing to give
[but have decided it's best not to]
Sometimes you make me feel like a rag-doll,
not feeling anything but feeling something at all;
I can't speak because you always have a back-up line,
my mouth is shut && my hands entwined.
You can never ponder all the reasons I recite
because your ability to capture sentences is s.k.i.p.p.i.n.g. away!
Go on! Tell me you f\u\c\k\i\n\g\ hate me,
I know you only do that when she's watching you.
Pretending to be honest! Ha! Babe you are so the 80's
realize your game is over, your catch is on,
liar, liar, pants on fire....
Guess what? I never wanted you in my life.
Oh yeah I will keep on the rant
until I s.a.t.i.s.f.y. my desire to repulse you;
I want to h/a/t/e/ you as much as you say you hate me
so I can at least s*e*e* what you see with my proper eyes.
But you know what? nevermind that
what I needed from you I already have;
somehow I know your heart b*e*l*o*n*g*s to me
you just don't know it yet.
[but you will pretty soon or maybe when its just too late]
Anyways, I just wanted [need] to let you know
you still run on my mind, just not the way you used to;
this time I hate you and all I think of is a plan to make you suffer
just the way my heart bled for you when you said no.
I hope I got into your head on straight,
I see you looking me, looking her, looking me,
but what you see is what everyone else can n/o/t/i/c/e/
while in her you see what no one can find
[no matter how hard they dig]
Author notes
For you love, just for you and your beyotch- XXVampireeyesXX
In a list
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- My HM's ( Hopeful Melodies) • next in list
- .:D.i.r.t.y♥P/r/e/t/ty:. • next in list
A contest entry
- WHiTE [[trash]] BEAUTiFUL by DRUNKENxXxBABiiD0LL.
900 points, ended November 23, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - DIRTY [P.r.e.t.t.y] WHORE by Candy Morphine.
550 points, ended January 6, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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fricken hell this is amazing.
god you are such an amazing writer. the last line especially, made me feel such hatred for this guy;
welcome to the finalists list.
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Wonderfully written! i love this poem so much, i think it is one of my new favorites. i know exactly what you mean hun! for real no joke. it hurts to see the one you love be a d*i*c*k and all you can do is love them with your whole heart hopeing they will just love you back the way they used to but no they tell you they hate you and never want to see you again but two months later they want to hook up and get back together so you hook up and then they tell you oh nevermind im still with you BFF and you cry and hate them so much it is unreal. but you know wat the real B*I*T*C*H is... no matter how much you hate them and want to slash their great car and hit them and get back at them... you still love them and would do anything for them... wow sorrry i ranted but then i read this is just had to.. u put it all into words that i never have been able to. thank you for sharing this with me!
~allie
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Devastatingly brutal. I hope I never end up on your shit list. Your words cut deep like a knife.
Great poem.
Mike
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