I met this girl I thought she was a friend,
I considered her as my sis,
she is no longer family.
She hurt someone that she didn't even know,
she didn't know there story,
So how could she have judged.
She hurt someone that had a heart,
something that she doesn't have.
why, Who would do such a cruel thing?
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If that was about me, is it true now?
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nope not about u at all...I had wrote this before i knew u sis I just didn't have an AP account then...remember ur the 1 u got me hooked on this
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Oh, cool
Ohh ya! I forgot!
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This is good and so true to life. People who hav eno heart hurt others. People have harden hearts hurt others also. Stay clear of such people, they can destroy you. You are do young(15) in life there will be hurt and sadness. That is why animals are better. THey love unconditionally. The ones you save will lov eyou forever believe me.
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so true
hehe short && sweet . awesome write -
Hey you get too emotional lol just short like a story this poem is full of hatred and simple. Just forgive lol and I appreciate this line :
"She hurt someone that had a heart,"
That one is really deep and the whole thing is in this one line. Any ways Good Luck!
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Ouch! Sad, but there are folks like that out there! Too many of 'em as this fine poem proves! bravo...
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so far it's really good
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wow thats realy deep who would do that to somone well god work
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Nice poem. Lots of emotions in it. It really speaks to me. Sounds like it came from the heart. Good job.
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good!!!!!!!!!!
some people will be able to realate to that
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oh!
Poking a bit
Nice sad poem
A very uplifting poem read...
you shared your dearm, and which turned to bea nice poem.
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yay
awesome
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