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Beyond the Color of a Sunset

I want something beyond the color of a sunset
Where depth and warmth will linger a little while longer
When majesty is comprehended for a lasting moment
And clouds won't interrupt the thought of fire
I want radiance to reflect inward
Where glory is developed and refined
When the glow cannot be contained any longer
And appearance won't deceive the eye

Author notes

I was just feeling a little bogged down, so I watched the sunset on the mountains and I felt inspired to do a little spiritual writing.

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