shaking
and breaking,
my insides
all fall out
faking
and taking,
is just what
you're all about
had it
with hesitation,
got to get going
to keep moving on
tired,
of trying
and crying-
finally glad
you're really gone...
A contest entry
- hesitation by going nowhere.
600 points, ended October 5, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great job!!!!! I really liked it!!!
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so sad... hesitating to the point of pain...nicely done. thank you.
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It's great.
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