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I Am Dead

I don't remember dying,
And yet,
To the world i am dead.

I don't remember falling,
But blood,
Runs down my head.

When did you leave me?
What did i do?
How did i hurt you?
Did i agree?

Why am i in pain?
Why am i alone?
Is my cover blown?
Washed away by the rain?

I don't remember a storm,
But,

Everything's full of dread.

I don't remember dying,
And yet,
To the world i am dead.

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~I dont remember dying, and yet, I am dead ~ me

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  • thesefadingstars.
    October 10, 2008
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    this is rather good. I like the begining two verses and the end two