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june 4th

when the ancient rhythms return
it's like her tide is
snuggling up to my shore. 

like an accepting echo,
i hear myself reflected,
inflected with her nuances. 

her voice is an old song
i'd forgotten until i heard it played at a bar
by a decent cover band
a few beers into my evening. 

her embrace tells me she will never let go,
but that she is scared to hold on. 

we slip into conversation
like into a hot tub-- naked,
and to relaxed by the soft heat all around
to worry about
what the other thinks or
what will happen next. 

she is a cardboard box under a bridge,
a quilt and a rocking chair. 

she is a cup of steaming tea in a snowstorm,
one familiar face in a multitude. 

she is home,
and i want to be there. 

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  • BlueNote27
    October 4, 2008

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    Good stuff! Again, my favorite part:
    her voice is an old song
    i'd forgotten until i heard it played at a bar
    by a decent cover band
    a few beers into my evening.


    This could have been cliche. It wasn't. Kudos.