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Just a Pause

Pausing for an instant of time
my thoughts do a hiccup.
Remembering certain rhymes,
taking my book and curl up…

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prompt: hesitation

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  • going nowhere
    October 4, 2008
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    love the thoughts doing a hiccup... so creative! thank you.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    Very creative and sweet...my thoughts do that all the time, but sometimes last for day...
    Best to you always...
    my sister, my friend...
    mytsic


  • BehindTheShadow
    October 4, 2008
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    my thoughts do a hiccup...great picture, imagery at it's best, I love it!