you slipped,
and I ran.
in the split-second
of uncertainty
-I broke free.
Author notes
prompt: hesitation please keep it short. i will judge what has the most impact on me with the least words used, although i won't limit words. no erotica. no vulgarity. may add HMs.
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A contest entry
- hesitation by going nowhere.
600 points, ended October 5, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like this poem. It's short and sweet and interesting. Good piece.
I'm going to add you as a favorite.
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thanks :]
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it's hard to comment on these short poems,
but I loved it
and congrats on the silver
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wonderful write. in few words you spoke a million, and took the prompt in a direction i didn't expect. well done.
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thankss for the trophy
glad you liked it.
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Whoaaa. You are so freaking good at these shorter poems ! This was definitely one of my favorites, ahah, & I have no idea why? It just makes so much sense to me, & you penned hesitation so flawlessly. Beautiful. Keep it up, my dear♥
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Hmmm...this was very good. Thanks.
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