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Sucking Walls & Black Lines



black surrounds thoughts,
white screen where no words
take shape against a backdrop
of whirling static and; him

resounding echoes breath walls,
ready to explode in a tirade
of shut the fuck up and raging tempers
sucking at life; his own importance

darker moments when imagination
takes over, stepping across black lines
where clarity and freedom form
their own reality

just once a pillow
would look good on him



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  • Cinnarry gold member
    October 10, 2008
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    Wonderful Juls!


  • Cannonsfire
    October 4, 2008

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    *hands you the pillow* Feathers for a different use! C