What greater beings
Have created me?
In this womb shall reep destruction
More so on myself, for woe is me
Suicidial tendenacies
Indeed to be put asleep
Carlessly fashioning a plan of escape
Almost as if wanting to be
Living out of this closet shell of a womb.
Author notes
I used the word WHIMSICAL
And used the meaning for the word as an adjective: erratic; unpredictable
I kind of took it from the viewpoint as a emo fetus just plotting to escape.
---I dont have a problem with emo in general but the whole joke behind this is that emo is only labeled under ONE general category when really it shouldn't even have a category because all things are emotional which is true.
I dont care if its heavy metal, heartbreak, dark, murder, twisted, gory, weird or just plain. Everything has some amount of emotion behind it.---
----So just to label emo as a category in general is somebodies idea of a really bad joke.-----
Just so people know where im coming from, and nobody gets offended.
A contest entry
- Blow Me Away. by Dead Red Head.
400 points, ended November 5, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It seems like you put a lot of thought into it. I can appreciate that.
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I liked reading this. I also like your screen name, lol.
g'luck in the contest
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Haha
I like your screen name too
hello "feetus"
Thats awesome. Still sounds the same but different spelling.
Thanks for the comment.
lol
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this is a great poem but not what i'm looking for. each word needs to start with the letters, not each line.
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OH CRAP!!!!!
Even though i read the contest page like three times while thinking of a word, i missread it.
Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry about that, i feel like a genius now. -
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its okay, it happens, just try and correct it.
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Ok i will thank you for saying something so quickly.
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no problem
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