I hesitated to long
subsequently
the moment forever gone.
Author notes
Prompt: hesitation
My life is full of moments of regret do to hesitation.
A contest entry
- hesitation by going nowhere.
600 points, ended October 5, 2008, 9 entries
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Wonderful
Very well expressed. A great word choice. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you
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WONDERFUL!!!!!!!
Oh to count the times I missed out just because I did not act right away!
's Wonderful write!
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thank you Puppydog, your comments mean so much. Not only have I missed out but others as well, I think of the times I could have said something to someone that could have made a difference in that moment to them, if you know what I mean.
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how true... sometimes it is such a fine line, to hesitate or not, but once you do, the moment cannot be tken back. thank you.
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great job!
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
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