Dancing ‘round enthusiastically
Acting moron-like
Dreams’ re-growth’s enclosing
Around mankind
Doubtfully rechecking every
Angels’ mask
Author notes
Word used 'Dream', hope this is good enough.
I know it sounds random but it's not, I worked on this 2 hours and my dictionary is torn apart now but I learned new words, lol. If you don't understand where it is pointing at here's an explaination:
The titile clears it 'Us in a big world', us is the first line, we are people who are happily enjoying life.
Second stanza is the thoughts we have in this world and how they effect our lives.
Third stanza is the big world and how it doubts even angel's purity and how it changes people around.
It still sounds random to me. xD
Thanks for reading! 
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A contest entry
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1200 points, ended November 9, 2008, 7 entries
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wow, this is a very creative poem. after reading your explanation i had to go back and re-read it. you certainly have depth in your writing.
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Awesome
Masked are the angels, misstrust leads us to question, but masked they should stay, for if we knew who they were, there would be no mystery.
Short, but awesome.
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I enjoyed your poem and 'feel so small' with my own humble entry now... yours is really good, with a lot of thought behind. Good luck!
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Great write here
I so understood this right away for as I was growing up I was always told to be kind to all I meet yet to see in their eyes where their true heart lies for often danger comes with a smile . You have to protect yourself if the danger is seen and yet leave the kindness there for them as a seed to possibly show them the way where peace and joy lies
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good job nailing the form. i'll be back to comment on the actual poem later.
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I'll be looking forward to that. Thanks!
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I LIKE IT!!!!
Each stanza has an opposite meaning , beautifully done!
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this is a great poem, but not what i'm looking for. each word needs to start with the letters, not each line.
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Could you clear this a bit more? I'll do my best to correct it. Thanks!
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check out the link for an example. if you use the word bruised, then your first word must start with b, second with r, etc.
for example, baking round undercooked ice cream sundaes
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Haha, yeah. Ok, I'll correct it soon but that would be hard.
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yeah, it is hard, but you can do it!
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