The construction of a whole suit of armour,
had long been finished and completed.
It'd never failed me, not once, not twice.
Yet the bluntest of bullets had penetrated,
and shatterd deep inside.
The bluntest of bullets had hurt me,
and left me far behind.
Author notes
written september 15th
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Comments
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wow....
"the bluntest of bullets had hurt me"
that is a wonderful line!
very short but this has such a strong meaning, and it is so true of all things that hurt us. The big things tend not to matter but when the tiny things happen it scars us for life!
great job
~allie

